The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.

Practice this IELTS Writing Task 1 question on IELTSX. The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.

Pineapples Products Growing Preparing Process Diagram - IELTS Writing Task 1

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

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Written by an IELTSX user under exam conditions and published unedited and anonymously. Band 9 · 175 words.

The provided illustration depicts the process of growing pineapples and preparing different pineapple products.

Overall, the process consists of two main stages, beginning with the cultivation of pineapples and culminating in the production of three different products, namely juice, canned pineapple and fresh pineapples for export.

In the initial phase, pineapple crowns measuring approximately 26 cm are planted in temperatures ranging from 23°C to 30°C. After seven months, the plants are sprayed with ethylene, following which they continue growing for another five months. At the end of the growing period, the pineapples reach a height of around 30 cm and weigh approximately 2 kg before being harvested and washed.

In the following stage, the harvested pineapples are divided into three separate processing lines. Firstly, some pineapples are peeled and sent to an extractor in order to produce juice, which is then packed into cartons. Secondly, another portion is cut into pieces and slices before being placed into cans. Finally, the remaining pineapples are coated with wax, packed into boxes and finally exported to overseas markets.

Examiner feedback

This is an exceptional response that meets all the criteria for Band 9. It provides a clear, logical, and highly accurate description of the process with sophisticated vocabulary and flawless grammar.

Task Achievement - 9

- All requirements of the task are fully satisfied, covering every step of the process shown in the diagram. - The overview is clear and identifies the two main stages and the three final products accurately. - Key features like the specific growth timeline (7+5 months) and the different treatment methods (waxing vs. peeling) are well-highlighted.

Coherence & Cohesion - 9

- Paragraphing is expertly managed, clearly separating the natural growth phase from the manufacturing stage. - Cohesive devices like "In the initial phase," "following which," and "In the following stage" are used naturally and effectively. - The progression of the process is logical and effortless to follow from start to finish.

Lexical Resource - 9

- Vocabulary is precise and sophisticated, using terms like "culminating," "ethylene," "extractor," and "overseas markets." - Skillful use of specific data from the diagram (temperatures, measurements, weights) is integrated seamlessly. - No errors in spelling or word formation are present.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy - 9

- The response demonstrates full flexibility and control with a wide range of complex structures. - All sentences are error-free, utilizing sophisticated passive and active constructions appropriately. - Punctuation is used correctly throughout the entire text.

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