The diagrams below show the average cost of 3 different types of media device over a period of 6 years, plus their payment method for these devices according to 4 age groups in 2020

Diagrams show average cost 3 different types media device period 6 years payment method 4 age groups 2020 - IELTS Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

A student's answer to this task, and the feedback on it

Written by an IELTSX user under exam conditions and published unedited and anonymously. Band 8 · 210 words.

The line graph illustrates the average prices of three types of media devices between 2020 and 2026, while the bar chart compares the payment methods used by four age groups when purchasing these devices in 2020.

Overall, the average price of laptops increased steadily over the period, whereas televisions became considerably cheaper. By contrast, the cost of mobile phones rose only slightly. In terms of payment methods, buying devices outright was the most common option among older people, while younger consumers were more likely to use alternative payment methods.

In 2020, the average cost of a laptop was approximately $2,000, making it the most expensive device. This figure rose consistently to around $2,500 by 2026. Meanwhile, the price of televisions fell from roughly $1,450 to $1,000, representing the largest decline among the three products. Mobile phone prices, however, increased modestly from about $1,250 to $1,450 over the six-year period.

Regarding payment methods, nearly 80% of people aged 60 and above purchased devices outright, while only around 20% used payment plans. Among those aged 40–59, outright payment also predominated at approximately 57%. In contrast, the 18–25 age group showed the highest proportion of other payment methods (around 40%), whereas people aged 26–39 most commonly purchased devices outright, accounting for roughly 45%.

Examiner feedback

This is an exceptionally strong response that demonstrates a clear understanding of the task. The overview is concise and accurate, and the data selection for the body paragraphs is relevant and well-supported with figures. The grammatical control is near-perfect, and the vocabulary used is both varied and precise.

Task Achievement - 8

- The response covers all requirements of the task, presenting a clear overview of main trends and differences. - Key features are skillfully selected and illustrated with accurate data from both the line graph and the bar chart. - The comparison between age groups in the second chart is well-handled and logically presented.

Coherence & Cohesion - 8

- Information and ideas are logically sequenced with a clear progression from the general overview to specific data details. - Paragraphing is used appropriately to separate the analysis of the two different diagrams. - Cohesive devices (e.g., "Meanwhile," "In contrast," "Regarding") are used effectively without being overused or mechanical.

Lexical Resource - 8

- The vocabulary is used fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings (e.g., "predominated," "modestly," "purchased outright"). - There is skillful use of uncommon items and collocations suitable for academic data description. - Spelling and word formation are accurate with no visible errors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy - 9

- A wide range of structures is used with full flexibility and accuracy, including complex sentence forms and participial phrases. - The majority of sentences are error-free, demonstrating high-level control of grammar. - Punctuation is used correctly throughout the response to clarify meaning.

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